Innocent
People
Political
Cartoon
Picture
These are the five words I seem to have used an over abundance of during my writing of "The Obvious". My paper centered around a political Cartoon of Benjamin Franklin and promoted lax gun laws. I've tried in vain to decide upon words to replace these I seem to have used excessively. When I write, I tend to write using "people", "person" and "one" as pronouns. My paper was about a political cartoon so "political", "cartoon" and "picture" are understandably used often. "Innocent" is the only word that stands out to me but I can not seem to think of a way around using it. Well, no way that would not require myself to write in a much wordier fashion. Perhaps the best thing to do is simply limit my pronouns more often.
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